Talk:Mindful Yoga

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Review: April 18, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 12:28, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

I'll take this one too. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 12:28, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

You are busy! Many thanks again. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:00, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

I finally got some time off due to lockdown so why not :D Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:34, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Is it necessary to have those citations in the lead? At least not ref. 3.

Removed ref 3.

Paras 1 and 2 would look better if combined

Done.

Is it 'Mindful Yoga' or 'mindful yoga'? The article is not consistent on this.

Fixed.

In Origins, we need a link or introduction for Patanjali

Linked.

eight limbs of Patanjali's yoga What are those?

Reworded.

The link in ref. 8 is not working

Just checked, it's fine but registration is required.

Oops I meant ref. 7. I can see ref. 8 no issues Sainsf (talk · contribs) 14:05, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Updated URL.

Page numbers/ranges needed for many refs

Added for Cushman, but the others are just links to the books listed.

That's all I see. No duplinks, dablinks or copyvio concerns. Really interesting read, especially as I am interested in Hinduism and yoga. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:34, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

All issues resolved. Happy to promote :) Sainsf (talk · contribs) 14:22, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

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