Talk:Massachusetts Humane Society

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Jimlue in topic Good start

Good start

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But an intro is needed, in the present tense, preceding the present text, defining what the Society is and its purpose today. Instead, it plunges into the ancient history, and what its purpose was in the past. That is all vital, but it needs to come 2nd, not 1st.

Jimlue (talk) 20:41, 24 May 2021 (UTC)Reply