Talk:Maryland Route 23

Latest comment: 10 years ago by TCN7JM in topic GA Review
Good articleMaryland Route 23 has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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May 4, 2013Good article nomineeListed

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: TCN7JM (talk · contribs) 05:48, 4 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

It's been a couple weeks since I reviewed a GAN, hasn't it? I better change that. TCN7JM 05:48, 4 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

  1. In the second sentence of the RD, you use "the highway" twice. One instance of this should be substituted.
    I rewrote the sentence to remove the second "the highway." I also rewrote several other sentences in the RD.  V 20:52, 4 May 2013 (UTC)Reply
  2. "MD 23 was one of the state numbered highways assigned in 1927." -- This sounds like an awkward way to state the fact that the road was designated in 1927. Is there any way you could reword this?
    I tried rewording it. Let me know if it works.  V 20:52, 4 May 2013 (UTC)Reply
  3. In the auxiliary routes section, is it possible to use more specific dates for when the roads were constructed?
    I put 1963 for the year and used the same year's map to reference that because that is when East–West Highway is shown as complete.  V 20:52, 4 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

These are really my only gripes with this one. Great job! I'm gonna put it  on hold for you to take a look at this. TCN7JM 06:03, 4 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for your review, TCN7JM.  V 20:52, 4 May 2013 (UTC)Reply
You're very welcome. I'll  pass the article. TCN7JM 21:22, 4 May 2013 (UTC)Reply