Talk:Marguerite Bertsch
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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment edit
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Lesbianimages. Peer reviewers: Ravens NN, Eliza Mckenna.
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Ravens Peer Review edit
Good lead section. Reliable sources and great use of external links. The tittle personal life is good but the content in this section deals with her early life for the most part, maybe that could be a better tittle. Career section has neutral content, short but very precise. Outlines her early career without using persuasive language. Easy to understand.
Eliza McKenna Review edit
The content added was great! I liked how you uncovered so much about her lost work.
The flow of the material could be a bit better. There is also a bit of repetition.
The last link needs to be redone, it goes to the Carleton portal and not the actual website.
Lastly, in terms of adding content, maybe an addition to the reason why her work was lost, and why she could not be found. Was it due to the political climate by any chance? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Eliza Mckenna (talk • contribs) 04:11, 6 November 2018 (UTC)