Talk:Marc Yu
Latest comment: 8 years ago by 218.102.226.71 in topic REPHRASING OF AWKWARD SENTENCE
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REPHRASING OF AWKWARD SENTENCE
editThis awkward phrasing obviously needs to be adjusted: "By his mother's persuasions he began undertaking formal lessons later that year." "By", "persuasions" and "undertaking" are all contextually unsuitable.
For example: Complying with his mother's suggestions, Marc began formal piano lessons later that year.
Or any variation --> At his mother's behest, Marc... Encouraged by his mother, Marc... — Preceding unsigned comment added by 218.102.226.71 (talk) 07:17, 12 May 2016 (UTC)
NPR
editThe lad gave an interview on July 17, 2008, which can be heard in an NPR podcast. - Arcayne (cast a spell) 15:03, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
what happened?
editsix years later. what happened? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.35.176.10 (talk) 03:20, 18 October 2015 (UTC)