Talk:Liminal space (aesthetic)/Archive 1
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Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Very nice job on a very interesting angle. Keep up the good work.
GA Review
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 01:41, 11 January 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: Will get to this later tonight. 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 01:41, 11 January 2023 (UTC)
- Okay! This should be all for now. Nice article; it was fun to read! I have left some comments below and placed this article on hold for the time being. Please ping me once you have addressed my concerns so that I may know when to respond. Thanks! 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 02:43, 11 January 2023 (UTC)
- @LunaEatsTuna: Thanks for the feedback! I hope I've addressed your concerns, let me know if there's anything I still need to change. GenericWikiUser1 (talk) 02:27, 12 January 2023 (UTC)
- Nice work! I am more than happy with all the changes that have been made including the addition of another citation and am now happy to pass this article for GA status. Congratulations! Hope to see more of your work in the future—GA or otherwise, 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 04:51, 12 January 2023 (UTC)
Copyvio check
Earwig says good to go. Quotations usable per WP:COPYQUOTE.
Files
File:Royal York Hallway.JPG: good, CC-BY-SA 3.0, taken and uploaded to Commons by registered user.
Prose
- Suggest linking liminal place instead of liminality as a valid redirect (liminality may be linked in later sentences).
- Is it perhaps possible to add one or more sentences regarding the concept of liminality in relation to physical locations? Or, is the Internet aesthetic ultimately unrelated to the concept as a whole?
- I added a little more. I think the broader concept of liminality is inspiration for, rather than an essential part of, liminal space imagery, so I don't think going into great detail is necessary. A reader can easily refer to the "Liminality" page for more info. GenericWikiUser1 (talk) 02:27, 12 January 2023 (UTC)
- "Research has attributed" – only one source is cited. If the information presented is from only a single source then change the text to something like "Research by Alexander Diel and Michael Lewis of the Journal of Environmental Psychology […]" etc. Same goes for the lead.
- I have never seen em dashes used with the omission of an initial space and inclusion of a succeeding space before. Are you sure this is correct? I could be wrong—in which case, apologies!
- I believe you're right, good catch! GenericWikiUser1 (talk) 02:27, 12 January 2023 (UTC)
- The article is great and covers the subject very well, but due to its length I must ask—can anymore information be added at all? I saw that § Photography and Internet culture on the article Liminality is longer than this article. I do see that most of the cited sources on said section are not RS, however is there any other RS sources (perhaps other academic works?) on the liminal spaces aesthetic that could be added to this article?
- Yeah, as you've said the sources in that section aren't the best so I haven't included some of the info. It mentions the artist Jeffrey Smart, but as the article is on the internet phenomenon specifically he may not need mention (since his works predate the internet aesthetic). I found one other academic work which I have now included in the article. GenericWikiUser1 (talk) 02:27, 12 January 2023 (UTC)
Refs
Spot check on all references show no concerns—they all support the article's content.
- Ref 5 is missing a publication date. I believe it was published on 2 November 2020?
- Ref 6: I believe "Bloody Disgusting!" should be "Bloody Disgusting" (omitting the exclamation)?
Other
- I think it would be beneficial for readers to create an External links section and add Template:Commons-inline to c:Category:Liminal spaces.
- Add a WP:Short description.
- Recommend adding Template:Use X English.
Cats good.
Also, thanks for the WP:ALT text!
How is Liminal Space correlated to the Uncanny Valley?
In the wiki article Uncanny Valley; the response is directly correlated with the degree of Anthropomorphism of the object containing the liminal space. I fail to see how a view down a hallway is anthropomorphic in any faction? Either the phenomena is unrelated but coincidentally similar OR the research quoted was not fully comprehended/retranscribed and/or fully misinterpreted. 31.53.18.217 (talk) 12:34, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
- I think the expressed similarity is around terms that look as if they should be places, but really describe states of being. Consider the locations in a book like The Pilgrim's Progress: the Slough of Despond and Vanity Fair describe conditions of emotional reaction. In a similar way, Liminal Space sounds as if it should be a place on the map, much as does Uncanny Valley.
- Nuttyskin (talk) 17:28, 5 June 2023 (UTC)