Talk:Let Me Know (Tamar Braxton song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:28, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Lead

• and only included on the → and was only included on the record's

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• Al Sherrod "A-Rod" Lambert, Tamar Braxton, → unlink Braxton here and only use her last name

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• and Harmony Samuels → you may use "while" here for a better flow

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• 1976 single "(At Your Best) You Are Love". → you may just put the year in brackets after the title here to avoid repeition

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• complimented the visuals → there was only one music video, so please don't use the plural form

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Infobox

• All on point here

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Background and release

• and produced → you may use "while" for a better flow

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:40, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• included of a rapper → remove the "of" as it doesn't make any sense

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:40, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• Due to the experience, she chose to avoid making hip hop music → what do you mean here? Do you mean she chose to never release a hip hop song in her future career?

• Exactly. I have revised it to make it clearer. Aoba47 (talk) 21:40, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Composition and lyrics

• 1976 single "(At Your Best) You Are Love" → same as in the lead

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:42, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• She talks about love saying → She also talks about love, saying:

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:42, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• Well-written paragraph!

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:42, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Critical reception

• You should link "Music criticism" in "Critical reception" first

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:45, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• Again, very well-written

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:45, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Commercial performance

• number eight also on the same day → replace "also on the same day" with simultaneously

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:46, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Music video and promotion

• directed the accompanying music video → directed the single's accompanying music video

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• Throughout the video, Braxton → use "she" to avoid repetition

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• seducing the listener → who is the listener?

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Track listing

• Flawless ;)

• Thank you. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

• Fixed by myself...

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Charts

• Fixed by myself...

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Release history

• Flawless ;)

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 30.1% is still acceptable!

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Media

• Sample seems stable

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:50, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• No dead links! Good job!

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:50, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Outcome

• Another well-written article from the Braxton series !  On hold for 7 days! Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:28, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• @Cartoon network freak: Thank you for your review! I believe that I have responded to everything. Aoba47 (talk) 21:50, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• Gladly passing this! Congrats; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:52, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• @Aoba47: Would you have time to take a look at "Hot"? Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:08, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

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