Talk:Lately (EP)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 18:43, 26 December 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• where they recorded four original numbers → "tracks" sounds better here

 Done

Infobox

• flawless ;)

Development and legacy

• of the finish products → of the finished products

 Done

• which was well received → which was well-received

 Done

• throughout early 1994, at The Place → no comma here

 Done

• "Can't Even Fake It"; Ted Jensen, who mastered the recordings at Sterling Sound Studios in New York City; and Jean-Pierre Sluys, who served as an assistant mixer to both Chase and Schlesinger. → all semicolons to normal commas

 Not done – I wrote it per MOS:COMMASPLICE where semicolons are used used to separate items in the sentence that already include commas. Carbrera (talk) 01:00, 28 December 2016 (UTC)

• Wonderfully Nothing (2003), with his band Brookville → no comma

 Done

Composition and promotion

• Doing so, the lyrics (particularly any adjectives used) were summarized → Doing so, the lyrics—particularly any adjectives used—were summarized

 Done

Critical reception

• flawless ;)

Track listing

• flawless ;)

Personnel

• Adapted from Lately liner notes. → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Lately

 Done

Release history

• Unlink formats and labels, please

 Done

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 11.5% is super!

Links

• No problems here!

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article!
• No dead links! Good job!

Outcome

•  On hold for 7 days!

• @Cartoon network freak: – Thanks so much for the review! You're doing so well with the GA Cup! Regards, Carbrera (talk) 01:00, 28 December 2016 (UTC).
  • Thanks! Gladly passing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:44, 28 December 2016 (UTC)

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