Feedback from New Page Review process edit

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for this new article on a notable scientist. Some tips: the "Research" section should be based on secondary sources, not citations to his own papers, and the list of external links should be trimmed to only those that are most relevant to the subject..

Spicy (talk) 09:43, 27 June 2020 (UTC)Reply