Talk:Killing of Jaahnavi Kandula

Latest comment: 5 days ago by SafariScribe in topic Requested move 23 July 2024

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Police fired — Preceding unsigned comment added by 190.129.165.247 (talk) 21:19, 17 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

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Journalists often use passive voice when writing about police actions. Many actively criticize that this reduces the attention on the officers. Resources: https://sojo.net/articles/how-journalism-obscures-state-violence https://www.poynter.org/reporting-editing/2017/how-bureaucratic-language-strangles-journalisms-accountability/ Tiggeritian (talk) 14:43, 18 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

I adjusted the intro but left "The death of Jaahnavi Kandula" as I didn’t know if that is a Wikipedia style issue. It should be “Jaahnavi Kandula died." Tiggeritian (talk) 14:47, 18 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

Requested move 23 July 2024

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The result of the move request was: moved. Moved as an uncontested request with minimal participation. If there is any objection within a reasonable time frame, please ask me to reopen the discussion; if I am not available, please ask at the technical requests page. (closed by non-admin page mover) Safari ScribeEdits! Talk! 07:28, 6 August 2024 (UTC)Reply


Death of Jaahnavi KandulaKilling of Jaahnavi Kandula – It is more accurate to label Kandula's death as a killing. The sources in the article indisputably describe it as such. मल्ल (talk) 05:00, 23 July 2024 (UTC) — Relisting. Quadrantal (talk) 07:10, 30 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

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