Talk:Kathleen Shannon
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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Gvievy. Peer reviewers: Blu3v3lv3t, SICUwinki, Sweatervestcool.
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editYour page on Kathleen Shannon is very well written and it’s clear you’ve done your research. You’re very good at maintaining a neutral tone throughout. I also liked the handy box to the right which provided some helpful information and your sources are very high quality. There may be an easier way to format the filmography, like in a table, but her title may have to be changed from producer to executive producer according to Wikipedia. Perhaps that’s something you can tackle. The only thing I would really change would be adding headings. It would be great if you could divide the information into Personal Life, Career, etc. And I also wonder if you need the link to executive producer. But you did a really great job! Happy editing, Blu3v3lv3t (talk) 15:58, 15 February 2018 (UTC)
SICUwinki (talk) 19:08, 26 February 2018 (UTC) Peer ReviewSICUwinki (talk) 19:08, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
This Wikipedia page on Kathleen Shannon was well written and insightful. The article contributed well written information, with little spelling and grammar mistakes. One thing to make it easier for your viewers who wish to learn more about Kathleen Shannon would be to divide your information, into subtitles, that way the page will make it easier to read, as well will provide the reader with more information about the film maker!
Your writing on Kathleen Shannon proved extremely detailed, researched and proof read! I absolutely love how you filled out te filmography detail to include everything she had completed in her lifetime, as well as kept a third-person perspective throughout. The only thing I would change in the future is outlining her most influential and/or acclaimed films under the Studio D section. Sweatervestcool (talk) 19:16, 26 April 2018 (UTC)