Talk:Jiya Jale: The Stories of Songs

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Jiya Jale: The Stories of Songs/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 04:08, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
Nominator: Nicholas Michael Halim (talk · contribs) at 08:19, 26 August 2021 (UTC)

GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

General

• Based on my comments on Talk:In the Company of a Poet/GA1, try to fix similar issues. Will continue soon. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 16:48, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

Prose

• She got the idea in 2016 — At the beginning of every paragraph, we'll need to specify "Kabir"
• the English translation — linking "English" appears like overlinking
• Nasreen Munni Kabir came up with — remove the first name.
• fifteen two-and-a-half-hour sessionsv. 2+1⁄2 — consistency needed
• In translating his songs — should be "While translating the songs"
• "The whole narration ... bring out the — add {{nbsp}} after the ellipsis
• "For lovers of Hindi film — avoid starting a sentence with a quotation

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This should be changed to:

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Images

• Images can take ALT text
• Images are licenced fine!

References

• Suggesting to link "Speaking Tiger Books" every time in the references

That is it. Putting on hold. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 03:58, 5 January 2022 (UTC)

@Kavyansh.Singh: Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:12, 5 January 2022 (UTC)

Promoting. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 11:40, 5 January 2022 (UTC)

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