Talk:Jimi Jamison
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Doomsdayer520 in topic Needs sources and copy edit
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useless link edit
Link on song I'm Always Here points to Baywatch, which is mentioned nearby. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 88.80.224.229 (talk) 15:42, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
Needs sources and copy edit edit
SunCrow (talk) 08:20, 30 December 2018 (UTC)
- In terms of copy editing, I think the article is severely over-sectioned, as a subsection is not necessary for an information tidbit that is just a few sentences long or less. I will work on editing in this fashion. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 16:44, 15 January 2019 (UTC)
- Also the article is long because of repetitive and unnecessary prose. Stuff like "By 1974, Jamison was fronting the local Memphis band, Target, a five piece Southern rock band from Memphis, Tennessee, who formed in the early 1970s" will be changed to "Jamison fronted the Memphis southern rock band Target in the early 1970s" and the like. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 17:56, 15 January 2019 (UTC)