Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment edit

  This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Wikiassign247. Peer reviewers: Belles14104.

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment edit

  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 30 August 2021 and 21 December 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Ha.areej.

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Untitled edit

Suggestion-Much information is written in the paragraph about her that can be split up into sections discussing, early life, her career, publications, awards, and legacy. The information is there and stated, but a lot more detail can be written in following sections. -wikiassign247

Sources to be used: J.S. & R. F. Croucher Mistress of science, The story of the remarkable janet taylor, pioneer of sea navigation — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wikiassign247 (talkcontribs) 18:48, 1 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Peer Review edit

The article contains a lot of great information! I agree with the comment above that the information could be broken up into subsections to make it a little easier to read and for quick access when researching Janet Taylor.

Also, I'm not sure if these are required, but there could be places where an embedded link could be used that redirects the reader to another Wikipedia article for more information.

Your citations looked good and were functional when clicking on them.

Keep up the good work!

Belles14104 (talk) 02:51, 21 February 2018 (UTC)Belles14104Reply

@Belles14104 and @rosegold12 Thanks for your suggestions, I really appreciate your feedback!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wikiassign247 (talkcontribs) 21:04, 24 February 2018 (UTC)Reply