Talk:Jane Schutt

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Ashjan263 in topic Recommendations to improve the article

Recommendations to improve the article

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I think all the content provided in this article is very good, but I also think it is rather limited. I think more information on her early life should be added in order to better contextualize her life and her motivations for becoming a civil rights activist. Adding a little more specific information to the lead section may be helpful, such as a brief description of what she actually did to highlight her efforts and differentiate her from other civil rights activists. It could also be helpful to add an image of Schutt so people know what she looked like and may be able to recognize her. Ashjan263 (talk) 13:02, 28 September 2022 (UTC)Reply