Talk:James Moore (Cornish author)

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Mongreilf in topic "lifelong affliction"

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The following is rather vague:

He has spoken on both national and international platforms, broadcast, made appearances on television and been published in journals

— a sourcing of this would be useful, as would breaking the claim down into more concrete historical activities.

Mds 17:53, 2 December 2005 (UTC)Reply

I agree. (I wrote it) It is taken from the text about Moore on the back of his biography. I will try to come up with a better version.

Secondly, why have the line "dedicated to Lannes" on the "Anatomy of myth"? A rather superfluous fact, I would say.

Peterak 14:41, 3 January 2006 (GMT)

Re: the dedication, you're absolutely right — largely superfluous, especially in terms of its placement in the bibliographic listing.

It could be a fact worth noting in the body of the article, though, as Moore's withdrawal from the Society might cast implications upon his relationship with his teacher. What do you think?

Mds 17:46, 3 January 2006 (UTC)Reply

I've read his biography, and I will reread and see if I find some implications for their relationship. I think she died before he withdrew from Gurdjieff Society. He is still a strong supporter of Gurdjieff (and Gurdjieff Society) and I do not think his views as to Madam Lannes was changed very much. What do you think?

Peterak 15:04, 18 January 2006 (GMT)

My earlier notes has been confirmed, and I have changed the text accordingly.

Peterak 09:04, 31 January 2006 (GMT)

"lifelong affliction"

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just lol--Mongreilf (talk) 15:27, 14 January 2008 (UTC)Reply