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This following text was added at the bottom of the article text, but has to be moved here to the talk page. This is where any discussion on improving articles is supposed to take place, not in the article. Cmr08 (talk) 15:01, 13 December 2016 (UTC)
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Some of the following are notes I have on the section: 1 - A table of contents would be helpful to users who are just trying to find and jump to specific information 2 - I noticed there are no in-text citations; footnotes are helpful just to see where the information is coming from 3 - I'm unsure of why the Early Life section is in a different font in the middle of the page, is it a quote?
Overall I think you did a great job breaking your information into different sections, it was very easy to understand. - Megan McHugh — Preceding unsigned comment added by Meganamchugh (talk • contribs) 20:59, 5 December 2016 (UTC)