Talk:Iverkala

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Allens in topic Copyedit and references

Copyedit and references edit

This article is hard to understand, and it really needs to be copyedited to be (easily) readable.

Here are a few sentences I didn't understand:

  • Attuvassery provides lots of human resources to the society such as Nanu jyolsan, AP Ramakrishnan, etc.
    Are these names? They seem unrelated...
  • " ATTUVASSERY attuvassery is a village in kottarakkara taluk, Vettikkavala block, near Tekkumcheri and Mavadi, Attuvassery is a beautiful village has number of good sceneries like "kattakkuzhi,kalathattu etc.."
    I'm not sure if this village is directly related to Iverkala. I can't find much about Iverkala online, so maybe someone with a book about this region can help.

I would try to clean this up (I did remove some stuff), but I really don't know anything about this village, and might remove some important info. (and there is little about it online)

πr2 (tc) 23:32, 24 April 2012 (UTC)Reply

Without references, I can't tell either what a lot of the material needs in the way of copyediting. Allens (talk | contribs) 15:55, 25 May 2012 (UTC)Reply