Talk:International School of Curaçao

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Boulangerv in topic CSD

CSD edit

Although this is the result of a class project, this page has not been written for advertisement purposes but to inform about the International School of Curacao. All content is suitable and editable. Please do not delete, you can contest this opinion here.

Thanks for the comments, I will clean up the format. Sorry about the tags, my first attempt at formatting was a bit too thorough. I will edit this article in the next few days Boulangerv (talk) 19:31, 26 November 2007 (UTC)Reply

Sources were added for the article. (Boulangerv 14:17, 4 December 2007 (UTC))Reply

Article tags edit

Please leave the tags until the issues are addressed. The tone of the article is not appropriate, it uses words that should be avoided, and it reads like an advertisement, even if that was not the intent. It also needs to be cleaned up to be the format of most of the school articles. The tags are there to allow editors to work on articles in their area of expertise, and aren't a negative, but just a note that some issues need addressing. Additionally, reliable, third-party sources should be found to cite the information. Cheers, ArielGold 09:25, 21 November 2007 (UTC)Reply