Talk:Il Corral

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The tone of this article seems to be leaning towards non-NPOV. I think it should be rewritten to sound more encyclopedic. hotdiggitydogs 18:40, 18 July 2007 (UTC)

Edit 11 Jan 2011

In copy-editing I have Wikified, removed weasel words, loaded terms, blogese and band-site-style non-NPOV. I have added cite requests for unsupported claims. I have changed ‘Partial list of bands that played at Il Corral’ section to ‘Bands that played at Il Corral’ – a ‘partial’ is not necessary… if it’s worth mentioning, we mention it; if it’s not, we leave it out. No “etcs”, “and other”, “such as”, “including”, or anything (eg. partial) that implies these by omission.

The article had/has no citations, so References section removed until references supplied.

This article had lain unimproved for over a year, and was likely to remain so. There has been ample time for improvement if what was/is said is of worth, evidenced, and of national or international notability.

The disinterested, but only apparent, facts remain, but what remains is still un-cited and leaves the article, I believe, not particularly notable.

Acabashi (talk) 14:01, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

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