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"It also peaked in the top twenty of the United States, at twenty-one in Australia and Ireland. It also charted in the top thirty in the United Kingdom, becoming a top ten hit on the UK R&B Chart." You have two back to back sentences with the same opening line, please rephrase one or the other. Done
"The song was set to be the first real record that Brown had released since his altercation with then-girlfriend Rihanna at the beginning of the year." Needs to have a source right after, or it falls under original research. Done
"The song, influenced by hip-hop and rock, has been described as "upbeat tune",[...] Grammer, should be described as an Done
aCharts is used throughout the article, needs to be replaced. Done, with the exception of Australia which I explained.
Alright, simple issues, please work to correct them ASAP. Other than that great work on the article. (CK)Lakeshade✽talk2me 22:34, 25 June 2010 (UTC)Reply
Regarding the Critical reception section, could you expand it? Each review is only like 1 sentence.
Chart performance could use minor expansion. Somewhat short considering it could be much longer. (CK)Lakeshade✽talk2me 21:34, 26 June 2010 (UTC)Reply
Ehhh, lol. As for the critical reception, I've scoured single and album reviews for the few weeks I went back and worth working the article and that is as much as I could find. Also, Billboard really didn't cover the song so it was hard to develop any interesting facts or anything to inject the chart performance with. Candyo32 (talk) 21:45, 26 June 2010 (UTC)Reply
Reading it again the only real outstanding issue i found was synth-pop being included in the genres section because its not mentioned in the article (maybe it is but i didnt locate it, inform me if im wrong) (CK)Lakeshade✽talk2me 05:18, 27 June 2010 (UTC) DoneReply