Talk:Huishan clay figurine
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--Marcovedoa (talk) 13:18, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Very interesting article. This sentence seems not too much clear In "Huishan, there have been many temples and ancestral halls, and prominent temples and ancestral halls have staged performances for rewarding gods or ancestors since ancient times."
--BO3064 (talk) 14:07, 18 June 2021 (UTC) The article while is of prominence and adds value to wiki. It is well written for the most part. Here are a few suggestions: 1. Please improve on the tone of the article. The present tone which is appreciative indicated from words like exquisite needs to be corrected into a more neutral one. 2. The article has been written from a first person perspective which needs to be avoided. In case of opinions of the public, proper references need to be provided. 3. Ideally references are to be provided at the end of every paragraph. The superscript indicative of references needs to be before the punctuation. 4. Avoid repeating wikilinking of pages more than once unless the article is very long.
--Criticaldesigner (talk) 14:49, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
Very nice and comperhensive article. My suggestion would be adding more details about the making proccess of the artefacts. Maybe also some extra information about the tools used, setup and how this is influencing their style. May be also some extra references might be needed to support some parts of the articles that does rely on one reference.