Talk:Housing in the United States

Latest comment: 9 months ago by 2601:197:D00:3CA0:3093:CE08:1AF:3375 in topic overall excellent

Feedback from New Page Review process

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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thank you for starting this new article, but it feels woefully incomplete. It is a large topic but only has one brief paragraph on how to build a house, then some stats about homelessness. To be honest, the point of this article is tough to pin down..

---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 15:42, 7 January 2021 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: Global Poverty and Practice

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 August 2023 and 20 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Am0ria1 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Panda1600, Angiesyz.

— Assignment last updated by Aksgpp3131 (talk) 07:14, 19 December 2023 (UTC)Reply

expand on health effects

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It would be useful to include more specific information regarding the health risks caused by unsafe and inadequate housing. Maybe adding a section discussing the increased health risks that exist within affordable housing structures, where there is often little funding available to continually renew and renovate these structures. Am0ria1 (talk) 04:53, 16 November 2023 (UTC)Reply


overall excellent

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but in the intro "commoified" and "faicloth limit" are jargon please replace with plain english thanks !! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:197:D00:3CA0:3093:CE08:1AF:3375 (talk) 16:56, 27 January 2024 (UTC)Reply