Examples of British animation

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Myth of Persistence of Vision

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The information in this article clashes with another wikipedia article: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Persistence_of_vision —Preceding unsigned comment added by Coopstah (talkcontribs) 18:05, 14 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

Room for improvement: Tone, lack of sources, no images

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This article seems to be largely a summary of Van Norris' Drawing Comic Tradition, with few other sources. It also at times reads like an essay, rather than an encyclopedic article. It also includes no visual accompaniment, which - for an article about a visual art form - is pretty disappointing! I think this article could do with some serious attention and TLC to bring it up to scratch 80.193.25.91 (talk) 02:51, 30 December 2015 (UTC)Reply