Talk:Henry Halstead

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Rick lightburn in topic Edits, September 29 2008

Edits, September 29 2008 edit

The text often had some confusion about tenses, which I've tried to straighten out. Some of the language read like Halstead's publicity, and I've tried to rephrase it to what I feel is more appropriate. Rick lightburn (talk) 18:24, 29 September 2008 (UTC)Reply