Talk:Hemlock Grove (TV series)

The Town isn't Fictional

??? I went to that high school. Why does this article claim that Nazareth, Bethlehem, and Allentown, Eastern, PA doesn't exist? The tower was knocked down recently, btw. Pretty much the only thing changed about the town in this show was that it's claimed to be western, PA instead of eastern, PA. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.164.141.120 (talk) 13:27, 28 July 2020 (UTC)

Storyline

I'd recommend someone clean up this section. It's overly specific, and reads like a blog. I'm not part of this WikiProject, so I defer to you guys. ;) Havensfire (talk) 00:26, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

Agreed. It reads like a badly written blog attempting a screenplay complete with scene direction. It's uncharacteristic of Wikipedia. I'll give it a few more days since it's a new release and it looks like it's being added as someone watches each episode. --24.148.80.72 (talk) 01:17, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

Work in progress, will edit accordingly. And if you think it's written like a fourth grader, there's nothing stopping you from putting in some effort yourself. --Chanceous (talk) 03:09, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

Wikipedia is not your personal blog. Please do not include signatures in your edits. Furthermore, please look at other pages that offer episode summaries. There is a standard format. Also consult the guide to writing plot summaries. --Dylan Henrich (talk) 03:53, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

I'm not writing a "personal blog." If you think the summaries of any of the episodes are inappropriate, go ahead and write them yourself. When I've finished, I will make reasonable and appropriate edits. You're free to help. --Chanceous (talk) 04:10, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

Insulting my on my user page is not the best way to go about this. Instead of engaging in some kind of stream of conciousness writing while watching the series, do that in a word processing program, and then post the edited version. Wikipedia is not your personal website. --Dylan Henrich (talk) 04:56, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

Or you could do it yourself rather than whining about the job someone else is doing. Something is better than nothing. Wikipedia is not his personal web-page, nor is it your personal kingdom. Get off your lazy butt and edit it yourself if you don't like it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.15.135.149 (talk) 05:08, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

No reason to take the criticism personally. There's a reason why the clean-up was given a few days; it's an act of good faith to assume good intentions. Also, I don't see any mention of it being critiqued as "written by a 4th grader". It just clearly has a personal tone, and like most tone problems, it's best if left to the original editor to correct to avoid this exact sort of dramatic personal slight. You may want to read up on Wikipedia's insult page if you're new to editing. --24.148.80.72 (talk) 01:21, 23 April 2013 (UTC)

Well, I haven't finished watching the show yet, so I don't think that'd be proper. I came by to find out more about the show, and read the storyline for the first couple of episodes. Besides, it's just a suggestion. Like I said, I'm not active within this WikiProject, and I thought leaving a bit of constructive criticism was warranted, since this didn't seem on par with other TV series' synopses. Havensfire (talk) 07:19, 22 April 2013 (UTC)