Talk:Hemin Hawrami
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Hemin Hawrami Early Life edit
Hello, I am new to Wikipedia and writing my first article. Thank you to all who are helping and contributing to this article, this is a big help for me in writing my first Wikipedia entry. I have some comments regarding edits to the Hemin Hawrami 'Early Life' section:
1) Hawrami himself has said that he secretly entered Iraqi Kurdistan during the 1991 Kurdish uprising against Saddam Hussein. So I think it would be better to keep 'he has said that he secretly entered...', not just 'he secretly entered....'. Would this be acceptable?
2) I created a subheading 'Education' which was removed and the text from that section was moved to 'Early life'. However, the parts that were moved were his studies carried out when he was at least 40 years old. So I think these should remain in a separate 'Education' section, as studying at the age of 40 does not relate to his early life.
I make these comments so that contributors can understand why I have undone some of the contributions. As this is my first contribution, I appreciate constructive edits.
Vianrahman (talk) 09:44, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
Hemin Hawrami: KDP 13th congress elections edit
Regarding the edit on the KDP 13th congress elections, the text was edited from "coming 23rd out of 51 places" to "placing 23rd out of 51 elected candidates". I think the word 'candidates' needs to be changed back to places as the sentence refers to the number of available seats or places in the KDP leadership council. It does not refer to the number of candidates. In fact, there were 140 candidates, not 51. So I will change "candidates" back to "places" or seats, and will add that there were 140 candidates competing in the election, with a reference. Vianrahman (talk) 10:06, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
Politician Infobox for Hemin Hawrami edit
Hello dear editors, thanks for your tips and guidance on my first article. I added the 'politician infobox' template, this is the first time that I've added an infobox so it probably needs more work. From the Politician Infobox template I added the field called 'legislature' so that I could enter 'Kurdistan Parliament - Iraq', however it doesn't seem to appear. I must be doing something wrong here. I'd appreciate your tips. Regards Vianrahman (talk) 12:31, 25 August 2019 (UTC)
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Feedback from New Page Review process edit
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thank you for this new article, but note that it is currently an "Orphan" meaning that no other Wikipedia articles link TO it. This makes the article tough to find for interested readers. See WP:DE-ORPHAN for pointers..
---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 20:34, 17 November 2019 (UTC)