Talk:Global Child Forum
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Psiĥedelisto in topic Tags update
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Tags update
editHello PeterGamen! As per your request at WP:THQ, I have made the tags reflect the article's current content. I will explain some of what you need to do more in-depth here to help you.
- Press release tag: The article is very vague and non-specific, using too many weasel words such as "top business leaders"[who?], "children’s rights issues faced by that particular region"[example needed], "approximately 300 regional leaders"[example needed], et cetera. You should try to say what was actually accomplished by this organization other than vaguely defined groups of people just talking. You should also mention if anyone was critical of the organization during any of the forums, and what the organization's reply was. Really, each forum and what happened should have its own, neutral, encyclopedically toned section.
- Not enough inline citations: You've improved things somewhat by adding more citations, but most of the article still has no inline citations. On Wikipedia we require that all potentially contentious information (that is, almost everything) have an inline citation immediately following it.
I believe that the other tags are self explanatory. Happy Wikipedia-ing! 
Psiĥedelisto (talk) 11:01, 25 January 2017 (UTC)