Talk:Ghulam Sarwar Khan

Latest comment: 6 years ago by GorgeCustersSabre in topic Copy editing

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Copy editing edit

The paragraphing in this article is very clumsy and repetitive, so I'm trying to correct and tighten it. I'll also copy edit. Best regards, George Custer's Sabre (talk) 04:47, 7 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

@GorgeCustersSabre: You removed some essential information which I have restored. We need to explicitly mention the name of the house, the subject was elected to. --Saqib (talk) 05:48, 7 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
Be at peace, my friend. We both want the article to be accurate, reliable and readable. Particularly with regard to readability, I've just got rid of needless repetition. Best regards, George Custer's Sabre (talk) 05:58, 7 January 2018 (UTC)Reply