Talk:Galeazzo Maria Sforza
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Deliusfan in topic Clarity and grammar need to be applied to this passage
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2nd marriage edit
The second wife of Galeazzo Maria was Bona di Savoia and not the daughter of Ludovico II Gonzaga. See it:Galeazzo Maria Sforza#Successione or fr:Bonne de Savoie. Who can edit it with a better english than mine ? Cordially, ℍenry (speak slowly, please) 19:06, 28 June 2007 (UTC)
Clarity and grammar need to be applied to this passage edit
He had the habit of raping both men and women, and of appropriating the wives of others, and even worse, once he had finished, he had them raped in turn by his favorites, reason that was the basis of the conspiracy that crushed him in 1476.
There are too many clauses; I feel an elision was made from the source material but it actually created a run-on sentence. Deliusfan (talk) 01:45, 2 August 2022 (UTC)