Talk:First South Yorkshire

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Grgrsmth in topic Untitled

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The last sentence in the article needs to be given a neutral view as it seems biased to re-regulation of the buses. -- Matthew Forth 88.109.123.206 18:37, 21 August 2006 (UTC)Reply

Added details of criticisms of First, which have been widely covered in local media. These criticisms were removed previously; removing them is not the same as correcting non-neutrality! 89.242.70.160 21:53, 25 June 2007 (UTC)Reply


I've done a lot of editing on this page today, as much of the information seemed out of date. While I know that First's service is poor, I can't really find any references for the criticisms section; if whoever wrote that could give an accurate and decent reference I'd be very grateful. Grgrsmth (talk) 14:43, 16 July 2012 (UTC)Reply


Updated this again after the introduction of the 'Simplicity' programme. However, I've not had the time to look at all the routes. The section on the Overground needs extensive work. --Grgrsmth (talk) 22:00, 19 December 2012 (UTC)Reply

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  1. Requires infobox
  2. Requires photographs
  3. Requires addition of inline references using one of the {{Cite}} templates
  4. Switch existing references to use one of the {{Cite}} templates
  5. Copy edit for WP:MOS
Keith D (talk) 14:50, 25 January 2008 (UTC)Reply

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