Forest

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Can we have more details about his forest? (Time stamp for archiving) 12:00, 1 January 2010 (UTC)

What did the editors invite, exactly?

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"the editors invited contributions from children, including a sexually explicit drawing of Rupert the Bear".

Is the present text trying to indicate that the editors "invited... a sexually explicit drawing of Rupert the Bear"? Or that one of the "invited contributions from children" was a sexually explicit drawing of Rupert the Bear"?

Come on, chaps, this sloppy use of language does not belong in an Encyclopaedia! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.177.29.198 (talk) 19:37, 28 March 2010 (UTC)Reply

Facts, please: what "$2 billion computer mail order company"

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"He also co-founded a $2 billion computer mail order company, which eventually went public on the NASDAQ and formed the bulk of his personal wealth"

This claim carries no credibility without a reference and without specification of exactly what "$2 billion computer mail order company" he founded. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.177.29.198 (talk) 19:42, 28 March 2010 (UTC)Reply

"a second life-threatening illness" only makes sense after a first has been specified

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"In 2001, following a second life-threatening illness, Dennis took up poetry"

What was the first? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.177.29.198 (talk) 19:44, 28 March 2010 (UTC)Reply

Ref improve "Publishing" section, existing refs probably cover

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The section "Publishing" is tagged ref improve. The existing references can probably be used to add citations to this section. Hopefully someone is up to the work. - - MrBill3 (talk) 08:41, 28 June 2014 (UTC)Reply