Talk:Fantasy Sports & Gaming Association

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Timtempleton in topic POV wording

POV wording

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The article reads like it was written by a PR person with phrases such as "As the voice of the industry since 1999" which really need to be cleaned up. -- Whpq (talk) 14:06, 24 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

Agree - I edited the lede to tone down the pr-speak and put in some sources to beef it up. Surprised it took 3 years.Timtempleton (talk) 18:53, 10 June 2015 (UTC)Reply