Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 January 2019 and 8 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Bentatree.

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Zac's Peer Review

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Very good article and interesting read! One thing I think you should do is take a look through it and fix any grammatical or spelling errors. Also, at the beginning of the Dangers subsection, you can probably leave out the transition you used to begin the section since it is the start of a new sub-section. Overall though this is a good article and I think if you continued to develop it and add a few pictures of the swimming holes, it would bolster it and create an aesthetically pleasing wikipedia page!