Talk:Don Slager

Latest comment: 5 years ago by 2605:A000:140A:18C5:7D65:5C21:B73C:4F68 in topic Bio language/citation needed
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Hi all, It would helpful if in addition to placing the tag to alert editors to how an article can be improved, there would be some specific suggestions as to how, and/or where, the improvements can be made. I would like to help here, and guidance as to what needs to be done would be so appreciated. It seems like just putting up a tag is only of minimal use. I am going to scrutinize the page, make whatever edits I feel are needed, which at first glance does not seem like much, and then take down the tag. Please, please, please, before anyone puts up another tag, can you give some specific places where improvement seems called for. Or better yet, just fix the language yourself. Thanks. Eggstress (talk) 07:10, 17 July 2017 (UTC)Reply

Awards

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It seems that it is appropriate for a CEO to have a section in his bio for recognition and awards. Here are some examples:

So I will be reinstating the awards that were removed. 185.213.20.159 (talk) 09:38, 2 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

Bio language/citation needed

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It seems the second paragraph in the opening section is not worded neutrally and is missing citations. Specifically, this language:

"Don has more than 35 years of experience in the industry, starting his career as a teenager and subsequently working at all levels within the organization. He has served Republic for over 30 years.

As CEO, Don has built a leadership team that has taken a holding company of hundreds of subsidiaries and shaped it into a unified American brand that stands for customer-focused simple solutions, reliability and environmental responsibility under its We'll handle it from here.™ brand promise. Republic's industry-leading safety program reflects his commitment to ensuring safety for 35,000 employees and 14 million customers, a successful model that has raised the bar across the industry."

2605:A000:140A:18C5:7D65:5C21:B73C:4F68 (talk) 16:49, 18 March 2019 (UTC)Reply