Talk:Daniel O'Rourke (horse)

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Tigerboy1966 in topic A horse that won 2 races

Not quite finished

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I'm sure I can find some more good sources on this. Good image- Hall was a class act and "Daniel" really does look 14.2 in the painting.Tigerboy1966 (talk) 02:26, 11 January 2012 (UTC) OK, done for nowTigerboy1966 (talk) 18:02, 11 January 2012 (UTC)Reply

A horse that won 2 races

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As far I can can tell this is a article about a horse than won 2 races 160 years ago. The section about the Derby race reads like a commentators over exited commentary. Surely this is not notable. As part of a article about racing horses it would be fine but as a standalone article? Mtpaley (talk) 22:45, 28 April 2013 (UTC)Reply

There is no wikipedia tag for 'reads like a sports presenter' Mtpaley (talk) 22:46, 28 April 2013 (UTC)Reply

The notablility template invite editors to improve the article by adding reliable sources. The article already has those, so I removed the template. If you think that the topic genuinely fails GNG then you could try nominating at WP:AfD. Tigerboy1966  18:48, 29 April 2013 (UTC)Reply
As for the style of writing, you can use {{tone}} to highlight any problems. Tigerboy1966  19:27, 29 April 2013 (UTC)Reply