Talk:Dan Grech-Marguerat

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Neutrality

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I've added the neutrality tag because while the COI issues occurred a long time ago, the tone of this article still feels overly promotional. Aspening (talk) 05:27, 9 May 2021 (UTC)Reply


18 May 2023. Overly promotional wording removed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A02:C7F:DCC3:F600:B813:62BE:DC2A:34A9 (talk) 16:04, 18 May 2023 (UTC)Reply

I have also cleaned up the page a lot - promotional wording has been removed and the articles is more neutral. I have made links to source material. The tone of voice is neutral. Musiclover1991tomodell (talk) 11:20, 31 May 2023 (UTC)Reply
Notwithstanding your changes, Musiclover1991tomodell, the tone is not neutral. Please read WP:COI, and understand that a conflict must be divulged. 2601:19E:4180:6D50:65F5:930C:B0B2:CD63 (talk) 15:34, 31 May 2023 (UTC)Reply

Birth date

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Do we have any citations for his birth date? I'm seeing changes recently, but I can't find a published source that actually supports any of the information we have about his birth date. I'm half-inclined to just delete it from the article entirely unless we have a source for it. — Red-tailed hawk (nest) 17:16, 9 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

Hi there, the source is his official website 2A02:C7F:DCC3:F600:B813:62BE:DC2A:34A9 (talk) 14:32, 18 May 2023 (UTC)Reply