Talk:County of Edessa

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Mathijsvs in topic Copy-edit

references or sources edit

Maybe this article was translated into the other language versions. I think this is not a good idea to translate poor referenced document. Can anybody clearly show where the contents of this article came from ? Jtm71 (talk) 04:35, 23 July 2008 (UTC)Reply

The usual crusade books; I know I used Mayer's "The Crusades", and probably Runciman. I don't know about the other people who have added things since then but there doesn't seem to be anything to objectionable. Sure it could use citations, but do you have any specific concerns? Adam Bishop (talk) 05:55, 23 July 2008 (UTC)Reply

I think that one of the purpose of the reference we add is to clear up that the contents has the GFDL copyright. I know that there are many articles without references, and I don't think the subject is objectionable now(I removed the templete), but do think anyway it needs to mention where it came from. (Am I thinking wrong ...?) Jtm71 (talk) 04:29, 24 July 2008 (UTC)Reply

Yeah, it does need references...we'll get to them someday! Adam Bishop (talk) 06:01, 24 July 2008 (UTC)Reply

Joscelin I did not die in any battle edit

It appears that he was only gravely injured during a siege and he did not die in any battle. At least it is stated so elsewhere; he even led his army afterwards. (While he may have succumbed to his injuries later, I have no sources for this and anything to that effect would be a pure speculation on my side.) 84.47.92.60 (talk) 18:12, 26 October 2009 (UTC)Reply

Copy-edit edit

This article was copy-edited by User:Mathijsvs on September 22, 2013. If my work has caused any factual errors, please contact me asap. Mathijsvs (talk) 11:21, 22 September 2013 (UTC)Reply