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Academy of Science and Technology
editNOTE: The edit, 19:26, 31 Oct 2004 Dpbsmith, consisting of the insertion of a section entitled "Academy of Science and Technology," is an exact copy of material that was solely authored by User:24.175.75.144 on 17:58, 31 Oct 2004 24.175.75.144 and originally was an article entitled Academy of Science and Technology. [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith (talk)]] 02:38, 1 Nov 2004 (UTC)
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editRevision before Delirium edited
editConroe is a city located in Montgomery County, Texas within the Houston–Sugar Land–Baytown Metropolitan Area and is situated 45 miles North of Houston, Texas found in East Texas. As of the 2000 U.S. Census, the city had a total population of 36,811. Conroe is the county seat of Montgomery County{{GR|6}}
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Delirium's version
editConroe is a city located in Montgomery County, Texas, of which it is the county seat. It is situated 45 miles north of Houston, Texas, and lies at the northern outskirts of the Houston Metropolitan Area. As of the 2000 U.S. Census, the city had a total population of 36,811.{{GR|6}}
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RJN's copyedit of both versions above
editThe city of Conroe is the county seat{{GR|6}}
of Montgomery County in the U.S. state of Texas within the Houston-Sugar Land-Baytown metropolitan area. As of the 2000 U.S. Census, the city had a total population of 36,811.
My explanation of revisions
editI did not revert your changes if you were compare above. It was a copyedit and also stating the facts correctly. Conroe is not an outskirt of the Houston-Sugar Land-Baytown metropolitan area (an official designation defined by the U.S. Census as of November 2003 covering 10 counties). Yes, there is a defined boundary for the Houston-Sugar Land-Baytown metropolitan area and it covers 10 counties. You also linked the metropolitan area to a redirect page that I correctly linked when I made my copyedit. Conroe is within the Houston-Sugar Land-Baytown metropolitan area as defined officially by the U.S. Census and the OMB and is used by the government agencies. Conroe is not an outskirt of this boundary. If you need further information regarding the officially defined boundary and the name designated for this metropolitan area, please go read this article and United States metropolitan area. I suggest you read and fully understand the metropolitan area name and boundary before changing it again or linking it to a redirect page—Houston Metropolitan Area is a redirect page. Seems to me you reverted my changes without reading/researching on the officially defined metropolitan area and boundary. I do not live in Conroe, but I do live in this metropolitan area—I know the area very well. RJN 12:46, 26 December 2005 (UTC)
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Heritage
editI wanted to add in information on heritage topics within Conroe. I feel it can be fun and educational to the readers. It would be a great bonus to mention the art and family within the community KamrynMitchum (talk) 22:05, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @KamrynMitchum:, and welcome to Wikipedia! I undid your edit because it wasn't written from a neutral point of view. Wikipedia articles should be written with a tone that does not sound promotional. There are several other important policies you should read before contributing. You can find them summarized here: HELP:POLICY. The Conroe article already contains information about its art and culture (in the "Culture" section). While the section is already somewhat lengthy, you are welcome to edit or expand on it with any information that can be found in reliable sources. Thanks, Stedil (talk) 23:10, 22 April 2024 (UTC)