Talk:Cindy Lee Van Dover

Latest comment: 1 year ago by PrimeBOT in topic Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment

peer review edit

1. Completeness:

   500 words per person: no. 147 words
   Lead Paragraph: missing
   4 Sections of content: no, only one
   Minimum ammount of citations: no, only one website 
   Images: none

2. Evaluation of Resources:

   Are the sources listed in the References of sufficient authority? yes
   Are the sources listed in the References of accurate? yes
   Conduct searches of the topic yourself. Do you feel like the authors found worth while     articles or just easily available articles? the ONE they found is worth while 

3. Readability & Content:

   Is the information being presented factual in nature? yes
   Is the information being presented objective? (No Bias)no
   Does the article flow effectively? no, it reads like bullet points when its a paragraph 
   Does the article feeling like it is missing content? yes

Huenemet (talk) 15:16, 11 April 2012 (UTC)Reply

Peer Review edit

You are on the right track, but you need to add much more content in order to bring this page up to the expected 500 words. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pdowell92 (talkcontribs) 15:13, 16 April 2012 (UTC) 1. Completeness: o 500 words per person: The person did a minimum of 500 words o Lead Paragraph: Yes o 4 Sections of content: Yes o Minimum amount of citations: The person has not enough citations o Images: 2. Evaluation of Resources: o Are the sources listed in the References of sufficient authority? Yes o Are the sources listed in the References of accurate? Yes o Conduct searches of the topic yourself. Do you feel like the authors found worth while articles or just easily available articles? As reader, the format you guys used in this secction does not help in your page. 3. Readability & Content: o Is the information being presented factual in nature? Yes o Is the information being presented objective? (No Bias) Awards and Honors: Mark in blue the names of the awards National Science Foundation and William & Alumini Fellowship Award, both are important achivements in Cindy’s career. o Does the article flow effectively? YesReply

Eivelazquez (talk) 03:26, 23 April 2012 (UTC)Reply

Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment edit

  This article is the subject of an educational assignment at California Maritime Academy supported by the Wikipedia Ambassador Program during the 2012 Spring term. Further details are available on the course page.

The above message was substituted from {{WAP assignment}} by PrimeBOT (talk) on 16:52, 2 January 2023 (UTC)Reply