Talk:Christmas Memories/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 02:56, 2 March 2018 (UTC)

• Grabbing this for a review if that is okay with you. Aoba47 (talk) 02:56, 2 March 2018 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

• In the lead, I would also include what number studio album this is in Streisand’s overall album chronology.
• In the lead’s first paragraph, I would just use “Columbia” instead of “Columbia Records”.
• I would link “It Must Have Been the Mistletoe” in the lead. It is a redirect to an album, but it is still a helpful link if someone wanted to know the original artist.

Background

• Please use Streisand’s full name and link her on the first instance in which you mention her in the lead.
• I would just use “Columbia” instead of “Columbia Records”.
• Please link “Grown-Up Christmas List” and “It Must Have Been the Mistletoe”.

Music and songs

• Unlink “Grown-Up Christmas List”.

Critical reception

• In the “Professional ratings” box, please italicize Slant Magazine.

Commercial performance

• For this part (and peaked at number fifteen.), it should be “15” instead of “fifteen”.

Final comments

• Great work with this article. I honestly could not find much to improve. I will pass this as a GA once my comments are addressed. Aoba47 (talk) 19:42, 3 March 2018 (UTC)

I will be addressing this review this weekend if that is alright with you. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 20:31, 8 March 2018 (UTC).

• Sounds good to me. Have a great rest of your day and/or night! Aoba47 (talk) 20:36, 8 March 2018 (UTC)

• @Carbrera: Any updates for this? Aoba47 (talk) 06:33, 14 March 2018 (UTC)

Aoba47 – All done. Thanks for your patience. Carbrera (talk) 04:11, 15 March 2018 (UTC).

Verdict

• Thank you for addressing everything. I will ✓ Pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 19:09, 15 March 2018 (UTC)

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