Talk:Chloride-bearing deposits on Mars
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Suhib almasmoom in topic 2nd review by Erica Allen
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2nd review by Erica Allen edit
Hey Nicki, Great job on your cite. Here are some suggestions on improving your cite even more so:
- Can you make your original figure a little bigger so we can see the dispersion of the chloride deposits. Copy the code from one of my pics if you decide you want to do this and maybe center it if necessary.
- Is there any reason why the chlorite deposits are spanned across the same central area across the planet or is that just a coincidence?
- why was pyrite tested when they were testing basalt with halite- were they looking for hydrothermal evidence or crystal structure similarities?- just curious about why that testing was relevant
- cite your first sentence about the 640 locations on mars and maybe add some more citations--I think we need 10-15
Looking good otherwise! Erica Eblamble (talk) 06:05, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
2nd reviews Hi Nicki, the article looks great
- i want to make the same point as Erica, the figure will better if it is bigger.
- the article can use more figures such as a cross section of the area or a table with data on it.
- is there any explanations for why Terra Sirenum has a high chloride concentration?
but over all the article looks cool suhib almasmoom — Preceding unsigned comment added by Suhib almasmoom (talk • contribs) 03:04, 8 April 2014 (UTC)