Talk:Bluemercury

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Spintendo in topic Requested corrections to typos


Requested edits edit

These edits are meant to allay the advertisement fears. If not sufficient to have the template removed, please notify me and I'll make sure I address any further issues. Find the markup in hidden text following. Thank you for your time! JaneStrauss (talk) 23:41, 6 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Reply edit

I have just edited the article to remove advertising like tone, and I have left a message with the editor who assigned the template to garner their support for removing it. If this is accomplished I will remove the template. Regards, Spintendo ᔦᔭ 01:46, 7 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

@Spintendo: Thank you! Would you be kind enough to include the infobox and inline photos as DGG suggested (total of 3: logo, one store front, and one interior below)? JaneStrauss (talk) 10:32, 7 February 2018 (UTC)Reply
@DGG: I'm sorry to bother you once more, but I wanted to know what the status of the article's copy edit was. Any feedback you could provide is most welcome, specifically as regards the ad tag. I listed a few links to the photos available at Commons in hidden text above (these include the logo, as well as several store pics) - I'm not entirely sure as to what exactly you proposed regarding them. Finally, I am also curious as to what the OTRS response period is after a photo has been released through that process. Thank you! JaneStrauss (talk) 00:56, 21 February 2018 (UTC)Reply
OTRS can be slow; it can be helpful to send a reminder after a month.
As for promotionalism, I have just dealt with it. DGG ( talk ) 21:25, 21 February 2018 (UTC)Reply
Thank you, will do! JaneStrauss (talk) 23:33, 25 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Requested corrections to typos edit

  • "In 2017, the company opened a 2,700 square-foot flagship store" - was comapny
  • "in 2006. In 2015, the company launched Lune+Aster" - was in 2006; > In 2015

Thank you! JaneStrauss (talk) 00:29, 4 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

Reply 03-OCT-2018 edit

   Edit request implemented    Spintendo  02:58, 4 October 2018 (UTC)Reply