Talk:Billie Jenkins/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Sainsf in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:04, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:04, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
- General
- No copyvio detected
- No dablinks
- External links check out
- Refer to her as either Billie or Billie Jenkins
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- @Sainsf: This is probably a stupid question, but I am not sure what you are referring to here? I have been following how other articles about fictional characters use names (introduce the character with the full name and then either use the first or last/family name when appropriate). I use Billie and the characters' first names as there is a lot of overlap with last/family name.
- Concept and development
- Say "the WB Television Network (the WB)" instead of "WB" at first mention
- Add "the series' protagonists" before "Alyssa Milano, Holly Marie Combs, and Rose McGowan"
- I added the series' lead actors as I believe the phrase "the series' protagonists" makes it sounds like the actresses are the characters.
- Kern clarified that Billie was not created Kern has not been introduced in the main article
- TVLine is linked twice
- During the WB's merge with United Paramount Network (UPN) to form the CW When was that?
- Any wikilink for "projection"? You use Reality warping in Christy Jenkins
- Characterization and powers
- Pam Shae called the character "demanding" Just say "Shae"
- Appearances
- Maybe introduce Helen Jenkins like other characters are in this section?
- describes as "[a]n above-average white witch" describes whom?
- Reception
- A writer from CurrentFilm.com What type of website is that exactly? Same for Eclipsemagazine.com
- Any positive reviews?
- A majority of the reviews I found ranged from mixed (at best) to very negative. I have included a positive review with the inclusion of the CurrentFilm.com source and several of the reviews are mixed where they either praise the character and criticize her storyline with Christy or vice versa. I am uncertain if I should put the character received "primarily negative" or "mixed" critical feedback. Which one do you think would best this section? Aoba47 (talk) 03:36, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
@Sainsf: I have addressed your above comments. Thank you for your review. Let me know if there is anything else I can do to improve this page. Aoba47 (talk) 03:36, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Great job, happy to promote. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:32, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Sainsf: Thank you for taking on all three of my articles for review. Your comments for this article were very help; I plan on c/e and revising this more and possibly put it up for FAC (I would love to get a character from this show as an FA). I look forward to continuing to work with you in the future. Aoba47 (talk) 04:38, 22 June 2016 (UTC)