Talk:Biko (song)/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Vanamonde93 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Ritchie333 (talk · contribs) 10:33, 4 September 2017 (UTC)Reply


Sorry for the delay, I will look at this now and hopefully get the review done by the end of the day. A quick look through suggests it is pretty close to meeting the GA criteria, so it shouldn't take long. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 10:33, 4 September 2017 (UTC)Reply

  • "The government of South Africa placed a "banning order" on him in 1973" - any particular reason for "banning order" being in scare quotes?
  • No reason. Fixed.
  • "Gabriel also incorporated sounds into his recording not of his composition." - I don't understand what this means
  • Yeah, not my best sentence...reworded.
  • "Gabriel released the song both as a 7-inch single and as a 12-inch single" - we've already been told this earlier (via an explanation of the song's introduction), do we need to mention it again?
  • Guess not. Reworded.
  • ""Biko" was first released as a single in 1980" - this should probably move from "reception" to "recording and releases"
  • Yep. Reworded.

That's about all I can think of - I've done a small copyedit to the article. On hold. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 16:15, 4 September 2017 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review, Ritchie333: I've addressed your comments. Vanamonde (talk) 17:02, 4 September 2017 (UTC)Reply
All looks fine to me, passing. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 17:03, 4 September 2017 (UTC)Reply
Many thanks. If you have any suggestions for DYK hooks, feel free to add them here. Vanamonde (talk) 17:51, 4 September 2017 (UTC)Reply