Talk:Automotive Industry Action Group

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Edward Vielmetti in topic Promotional / non-encyclopedic style

Starting to work on this article to address multiple issues found with it. Edward Vielmetti (talk) 19:13, 27 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Organizational history

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The timeline section of the article is copied in large part from the AIAG publication History Highlights. While that's a useful reference document, it's not really suitable for wholesale incorporation into Wikipedia. Edward Vielmetti (talk) 19:16, 27 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

See copyright review section below--SPhilbrick(Talk) 11:56, 9 August 2013 (UTC)Reply

MMOG/LE

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A link: http://www.ai-online.com/Adv/Previous/show_issue.php?id=2614 Edward Vielmetti (talk) 20:29, 1 July 2013 (UTC)Reply

And a second link, with more prose: http://www.industryforum.co.uk/practical-solutions/purchasing-logistics-2/mmog/ Edward Vielmetti (talk) 15:02, 18 July 2013 (UTC)Reply
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The timeline section was a very light paraphrasing of this document, so removed.--SPhilbrick(Talk) 11:56, 9 August 2013 (UTC)Reply

Promotional / non-encyclopedic style

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Looking for specific recommendations to improve the tone of the article (per warnings from 2011) to more encyclopedic style; any editorial comments welcomed. Edward Vielmetti (talk) 20:27, 27 September 2013 (UTC)Reply