Talk:Australian Ethical Investment

Latest comment: 6 years ago by TimStewartAE in topic Encyclopedic tone

Encyclopedic tone

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The last two sections in particular, need to sound more encyclopedic. They current look like they belong on the company's website "About this company".

Tbe topic headings go into general discussion ("Ethical Investing") explaining what this is, but this isn't the right place for that discussion. If those sections discuss the specific actions of the company, that is acceptable. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Whophd (talkcontribs) 06:49, 2 December 2016 (UTC)Reply

It's apparent this site is being edited by a staffer or someone attempting to use the page as an extension of their marketing. Gumsaint (talk) 02:25, 7 September 2018 (UTC)Reply

The page has been updated by a fellow staffer at Australian Ethical. I am happy to be guided on achieving the correct encyclopedic tone. I will not remove the 'advertising' alert myself due to my obvious conflict of interest, but please advise whether the current changes are sufficient to have it removed. TimStewartAE (talk) 05:55, 7 September 2018 (UTC)Reply