Talk:Arthur Bloom (musician)

Latest comment: 10 years ago by JNW in topic Neutrality issue

Neutrality issue

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The two sections in this article seem to be written from a perspective biased towards the subject, especially the MusiCorps section. Perhaps the section should be entirely rewritten. See WP:NPOV. TCMemoire (talk) 23:04, 25 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

  • Per those concerns, I've removed sections that were promotional in tone, and were off-topic--what's necessary to establish the subject's notability is more content on him, rather than MusiCorps. JNW (talk) 17:13, 2 January 2014 (UTC)Reply