Talk:Arndell Anglican College

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Review information, please

I don't know if this information is truly necessary (neutral) information to the page:

2018: Headmaster Gareth Leechman signs a petition with the Anglican Church Diocese of Sydney to retain s 38(3) in the Sex Discrimination Act 1984 (Cth).

I deleted additional details about the act that weren't neutral, but perhaps the entire action should go.

Thanks for reviewing! --Susan.Uttendorfsky (talk) 16:02, 22 March 2022 (UTC)

Copyediting/rewriting

Good day!

I have rewritten/reorganized the material and copyedited it as best I can (it being my own words). The article should be proofread or lightly copyedited to catch anything I missed.

Issues left to be resolved:

1. My previous comment about "2018: Headmaster Gareth Leechman signs a petition with the Anglican Church Diocese of Sydney to retain s 38(3) in the Sex Discrimination Act 1984 (Cth)." I left that one in, but deleted others. I also left in the one under the current headmaster: "In 2018, he signed a formal petition to retain s 38(3) in the Sex Discrimination Act 1984 (Cth)." Perhaps the first one should be deleted and this one left? I don't know.

2. I deleted moderately sized portions about this act.

3. The photo in the section HSC needs to be updated to show data from 2016-2021.

4. The current school tuition fees need to be updated.

I think that's all! Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions or issues. And please let me know if I've been overzealous in my rewriting/editing. I'm new here. :) --Susan.Uttendorfsky (talk) 13:33, 23 March 2022 (UTC)

I removed the template indicating copyediting issues. Having read the article, it looks fine to me. I did have a problem at two points, though, where the text refers to images. Under the Culture section, speaking of the crest, it says "The rays signify..." and "the undulating lines represent...". But the image of the crest is far away, at the very top of the page. Under the HSC Results section, it says "To the left is...", referring to a graph that is actually to the right (on my screen). I've made no corrections at those spots. It's probably better if the language doesn't refer to positions on the page. They may change due to future editing, or through differences in rendering on different viewing platforms. I'm not sure the information on the crest is needed, and it is sourced to the school itself. My two cents. _signed, Willondon (talk) 14:31, 23 March 2022 (UTC)