Talk:Anniversary of the Iranian Revolution

Section on "Celebration" needs some obvious work. edit

"Celebration" section needs work on sentence structure and grammar.

Based closely on USA Today article here: https://www.usatoday.com/story/news/world/2017/02/10/iran-celebrates-anniversary-1979-islamic-revolution-mass-rallies/97742024/

Ronaldws (talk) 10:30, 10 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

Here's the wording of this section; I've removed it from the body as it really doesn't make sense:

The anniversary of the Islamic Revolution is considered as a political celebration.[1] Iranian flags and many posters with revolutionary slogans were seen between marchers.[2] Also as anti-American senses, there was the United States flag and pictures of current and former U.S. presidents.[3] The presentation of Iranian unbreakable ties with the Supreme Leader and the Islamic Republic was the issue that prominent religious and political characters had requested from Iranian to participate to the march. Between Iranian officials who join to the march was Qasem Soleimani, commander of Quds Force.[4]

Please put it back if you can reword it so that it does make sense. Schwede66 08:24, 9 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. ^ Cite error: The named reference The new york times was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  2. ^ Karimi, Nasser (11 February 2022). "Iranians celebrate 43rd anniversary of Islamic Revolution". ABC News. Retrieved 11 February 2022.
  3. ^ Staff writer. "Iran celebrates 1979 Islamic Revolution with chants against U.S." USA Today. Retrieved 10 February 2017.
  4. ^ Cite error: The named reference Reuters was invoked but never defined (see the help page).